This is unfinished. It was written in 30 minutes and has had no editing. It's very rough.
"From heads unworthy" comes judgement - From Heads Unworthy - Rise Against
"But that's okay" because "I'm not okay" - ???? and I'm Not Okay - My Chemical Romance
And "for every man who looks upon me with judgement in his eyes
There's a woman who looks upon me with wetness in her thighs" - Help Wanted - Shane Koyczan
I've flown on "paper wings halfway around the world
Until they burned up in the atmosphere" -Paper Wings - Rise Against
And you "just stand there and watch me burn -??? - Rhianna
But that's alright because" "I'm coming back" - A Little Piece of Heaven - Avenged Sevenfold
I'd tell you, "war is the answer" and - War is the Answer - Five Finger Death Punch
"You better hide yo kids, hide yo wife" - ?????
Because when it comes to death "no one gets left behind" - No One Gets Left Behind - FFDP
But i'm more likely to be "standing on the rooftop ready to fall" - Ready to Fall - Rise Against
Than I am to even touch you
It's hard to be pacifistic when you mimic "the way of the fist" - The Way of the Fist - FFDP
That's why I have music, "and if I can't hear the music" - If I Can't Hear the Music - James Blunt
I'll need something to "be my escape" - Be My Escape - ????
And when "I write what I write" ???
People seem to think "A design is written in his head every time" - Remember the Name - Fort Minor
But when I write, it's more like a "bloodstained hurricane" - Stricken - Disturbed
And to write anything great "I bleed it out, digging deeper" Bleed it Out - Linkin Park
And when "I've no more blood to bleed" -Blood to Bleed - Rise Against
I beg and plead, "move, pen, move" - Move, Pen, Move - Shane Koyczan
Because "deep inside where nothing's fine
I've lost my mind" -Welcome to the Family - Avenged Sevenfold
So I write that my thoughts might
"Tumble up through the roof to tickle to toes of angels" and leave me - Beethoven - Shane Koyczan
But all the writing in the world "is never enough, no, it's never enough" - Never Enough - FFDP
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